self-critic.
I don't really like my design as it does not have the effects i wanted, cause my drawing is bad. But i like my second self-portrait(stylisation) because i find that the design is quite nice with miss rafidah's help and inspiration. I will try to improve on my shading because i'm weak in that. That was why my design doesn't have any shadings. My design's sketchy, so bear with it(: Will try to change.
Peer's critic-Jacqueline.
Her self-portrait has alot of fragmentations, which is nice and unique, but she'll have to improve on her shading, to make it more like a "fragment" or more real-life(if thats the effect she wants). She needs to draw thicker lines to enhance her drawing, or rather, the main focus on the drawing. It will look much better as she is very careful with what she sketch/draw, which is good! so that she'll not have patches on. No offence,but yeah, overall, her drawing is nice(;
I don't really like my design as it does not have the effects i wanted, cause my drawing is bad. But i like my second self-portrait(stylisation) because i find that the design is quite nice with miss rafidah's help and inspiration. I will try to improve on my shading because i'm weak in that. That was why my design doesn't have any shadings. My design's sketchy, so bear with it(: Will try to change.
Peer's critic-Jacqueline.
Her self-portrait has alot of fragmentations, which is nice and unique, but she'll have to improve on her shading, to make it more like a "fragment" or more real-life(if thats the effect she wants). She needs to draw thicker lines to enhance her drawing, or rather, the main focus on the drawing. It will look much better as she is very careful with what she sketch/draw, which is good! so that she'll not have patches on. No offence,but yeah, overall, her drawing is nice(;
Vivian,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see your art pieces! You are a very meticulous art student and I do see you putting effort in your assignments. Aim high and you are likely to achieve them.
- Ms Tan