Yani

Self critique
(ii)hmm , 6 out of 10.
(i) the stylization is okae and theres effort put in. but its done quite bad too as it is not done fully . my background stylization is also not done yet . i did nt shade all the lines behind which make the drawing look so not completed .
(iii)if i had the chance , i would make it much much more nicer and much more creative. i will make use of all th space left to draw more picture too. i will try to finish up my work on time and make th drawing more nicer . (:
Peer critique
I will comment on my friend,JI YOON .


Describe what you see, using elements of art (line, shape, form,texture and so forth) as your guide, describe what your peer drawn, what is the whole thing about.

- ji yoon self potrait make use of alot of lines and shapes . i can see th shape of a puzzle which forms up her self potrait. i find this drawing cool . she also included some random designs as her background to cover up all the space left . my peer has drawn her self-potarit and stylize it creatively . she had made her face into a jigsaw puzzle tht has been solved .

Analyse how the work is being presented,using principles of design (emphasis, repetition, rhythm, depth and so forth), analyse what is the relationship of the subject matter and the background.

- ji yoon make use of repetition . she repeated the jigsaw puzzle on her face . i think there's some rythm at her background drawings . i think the background is just random drawing so that her potrait wont look so plain . i find this drawing creative too .



iii) Interpretate how the work make you feel and think,-Describe the expressive qualities you find in the work. What expressive language would you use to describe the qualities (i.e., tragic, ugly, funny)?-Does the work remind you of other things you have experienced (i.e., analogy or metaphor)?-How does the work relate to other ideas or events in the world and/or in your other studies?

- i think that her drawing is happy as her face shows a happy smile . the way she draw a background also seems to show that she is happy and not in a sad or bad mood. her drawing also remind me of their cultures and shows some teamwork . by seeing at her drawing, i can know about what her culture is like .



iv) Evaluate if this work is a success or a failure.-What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or failure?-Compare it with similar works that you think are good or bad.-How original is the work? Why do you feel this work is original or not original?

- i think her work is a success but at the same time it is not too . her potrait is nice but her other drawing really need more pictures to cover up all th space and she should at least shade more so that the picture will look more interesting and lively . i think her work is original as she's th only one who make use of jigsaw puzzle to draw her face . overall i think her drawing is nice and i like it . (: