sabrina(:peer critic
i liked farahin's work as it really shows that she really put in alot of effort by drawing out the elements of art .she adds in more lines and different shapes to make it more nicer and better .
she really likes drawing the flowers as mayb she describes herself as aflower.
hahah !
she even drew out the lines as a background to make herself the main attention .and i find it unique.although there were no stylization done on her face she make use of her background to stylize something,i guesss she really like being with flowers as most of her drawings has atleast afew flowers(:
i feeel that the drawing is really unique as she adds in tme malay culture.this will help by telling people that shes is a malay.it is nice that she does not add both the malay culture and her together as it might get confusing.thus she made use of her background by drawing the malay cultures and she in the middle.i really believed that this drawing is a succes.
she has put in alot of stuff in there to elaborate more on her and her culture.i truly think that farahin's work is equally unique and nice.
she can improve on it by adding more design though (:
anw great effort there :D
self critic
i think that my drawings is not that nice as i did not rally put any effort in there.
i had use the malay culture and a portrait of me to put both things together.
i had not use principles of design that much and if there were any chance to do the same thing i will try adding more things to my drawing.i need to improve on my shading and colouring as there is not much tone if i were to shade,
i will work harder next time !(:
i liked farahin's work as it really shows that she really put in alot of effort by drawing out the elements of art .she adds in more lines and different shapes to make it more nicer and better .
she really likes drawing the flowers as mayb she describes herself as aflower.
hahah !
she even drew out the lines as a background to make herself the main attention .and i find it unique.although there were no stylization done on her face she make use of her background to stylize something,i guesss she really like being with flowers as most of her drawings has atleast afew flowers(:
i feeel that the drawing is really unique as she adds in tme malay culture.this will help by telling people that shes is a malay.it is nice that she does not add both the malay culture and her together as it might get confusing.thus she made use of her background by drawing the malay cultures and she in the middle.i really believed that this drawing is a succes.
she has put in alot of stuff in there to elaborate more on her and her culture.i truly think that farahin's work is equally unique and nice.
she can improve on it by adding more design though (:
anw great effort there :D
self critic
i think that my drawings is not that nice as i did not rally put any effort in there.
i had use the malay culture and a portrait of me to put both things together.
i had not use principles of design that much and if there were any chance to do the same thing i will try adding more things to my drawing.i need to improve on my shading and colouring as there is not much tone if i were to shade,
i will work harder next time !(:
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