Hong Lin

Self Critique:
1)i think my work needs more improvement to be like shawns
2)i have to work more on my stylisation
3)i think i get distracted easily.

Peer Critique:
1)i think that khadijah's portrait stylisati creative
2) Her culture drawings looks like she didi it in a hurry and its coloured halfway

KhadijahXD

SELF CRITIC xD:
I dont quite like what i've drawn... i thought that i can do better. This is seriusly not my best.The best and i can see my own effort is the culture drawing. And i love that piece alot bcause maybe bcause of th colour...The final design should have more colourful && th shading shul b more obvious. what i only like abt my inal design is my TATOO!!hehe!XD

&& also d idea of drawing th ppl's face frm my culture design..overall,i thought its preety sad * dissapointed drawing bt as a start,i think its ok && good attempt..i will reward myself over 10..maybe ard 7.(X

PEER CRITIC XD:

VIVIAN'S artwork! (X

eu have done a very good job evnthough as eu said datt eu said eu r just skeching...i like eur chinese culture alots!!haha!i agree that eu cn do better on eur shading...especially eur Final Design.(:bt overall eu have done a preety great job.XD eur backgrd shuld b okae..its just rite! there is effort being put in for eur Final Design and eu sktch!i blieve eu can do better!!(:

GOOD ATTEMPT YAAA!!

therefore,i gave eu 7/10!(:

Shafiqah

(Self Critique)
Some qualities that make my drawing a success was the shading and drawing of ten malay culture which have to combine with my potrait it came out to be a successful drawing.In my opinion i have tried to be as creative as possible to make my drawing different from others.If i were to mark my own drawings i will give my self a mark of 6-7.When an opportunity were given to redo everything i would probably change alot of my drawing eg like that drawing of the ten malay culture which should be more lively after combining it with my self potrait.Eveb it have been combined with my self potrait people should notice that i have been inserting malay culture drawing in it too.

(Peer Critique)
Nurin's work.

In her drawing i saw that she uses some elements of art like lines,shape and texture.She have tried drawing herself covering with leaves,chapteh,flower and also wayang kulit.Her drawing have shown that she's making use of the malay culture as her background whereas her self potrait were at the side just shows her side view.I felt that by looking at her drawing making me feel happy and i think that her art work goes well due to her shading.She did try to used pop art on her self potrait and it look great.In my opinion her work was a success.Indeed she still need to shade her self potrait really more.Overall it pleased me.I enjoy looking at it

Dinah

Self critics of my drawing;

i tink that what ive drawn is not as good as i tink that the drawing that ive drawn are too common.

i need to try out new imaginative and creative ideas on how to stylize more on the drawings.

i think that what ive is not very well done as there are less malay culture examples and i think my colouring needed more pressure on it and shading too.

ive put in 3 drawing of my malay culture and that the sepak takraw ball[as the background],halal sign[in the middle] and a batik flower at he side.

i put my self potrait at the sides of the two ends and i draw my hair in diff colours.

this is beacuse i do not want the drawing to look exactly like me but mostly a cartoon of myself.

but basically, i think my drawing was okay. :DD

YANI'S DRAWING:
i) Describe what you see,
using elements of art (line, shape, form, texture and so forth) as your guide, describe what your peer drawn, what is the whole image about.
Yani's work drew a stylisation of her self-potrait. She large out her face to the front and she drew different shapes at the back making it unique.
ii) Analyse how the work is being presented,
using principles of design (emphasis, repetition, rhythm, depth and so forth), analyse what is the relationship of the subject matter and the background.
Yani did some repetition in her drawing. She repeated the inner part of which is representative of her culture. There is some rhythm in how she random order. She represent her slef potrait making it seem as if the different shapes and drawings that she drew is representing her own culture. It would be good if she present some depth in her drawing like drawing the CHAP-TEH in a more wavy manner.
iii) Interpretate how the work make you feel and think,
-Describe the expressive qualities you find in the work. What expressive language would you use to describe the qualities (i.e., tragic, ugly, funny)?-Does the work remind you of other things you have experienced (i.e., analogy or metaphor)?-How does the work relate to other ideas or events in the world and/or in your other studies?
Yani's drawing seems happy as her face shows an expression of happiness. The pattern that she drew repeatedly on the gasing,chapteh and the sepak takraw ball shows that she is in a happy mood. By the way, i do not think there are any sadness towards this picture.
iv) Evaluate if this work is a success or a failure.
-What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or failure?-Compare it with similar works that you think are good or bad.-How original is the work? Why do you feel this work is original or not original?
Yani's work is a success but at the same time it is not as the her drawings really needed more shading and depth to be done. This is to ensure that the picture that she actually drew needs to come alive.
And to make it more representable.
But overall,i like her drawing as it expresses her feelings towards my life as well.

Supuchcha

Self Critique:

i) i think that its a failure
ii) i would give myself about 6 marks
iii) i would draw that it more neatly and try to add in more details

Peer Critique: (Farahin)

i) Farahin decorated her background with full of leaves and some other plants, I think it express her love for plants or gardening.

ii) Farahin did some repetition in her background. She did it with repeated patterns of the leaves, which showed her own malay culture. There is also some rhythm in her drawings by using the pattens of the culture of leaves.

iii) She express herself as a simple girl by making it simple by using the same pattern again and again. But I am amazed as she can express one type of pattern into different forms, like repetition for example.

iv) It's a tremendous success! I am so amazed! I love about how she used the same pattern and she can make it into different form and each of them expressed different aura.

Farahin

Self Critique-

What qualities of the work make you feel it's a success or a failure?
I feel that my drawing is creative because when I draw my final layout, I actually halfed my face and put all the malay culture of the batik around my face so it'll look as if I am looking at the batik. I overall feel that my work is a success although I know there is some areas that I can still improved on.

Out of 10 marks, how many marks will you reward yourself?
Out of 10, I think I'll give myself a good 7. It's not perfect, yes, but I am eager to know what are the aspects I need to work on! (:

If given a chance to start all over again, what would you have done differently?
If given the chance to do it again, I'll probably try something different like making sure when I draw the cultures and my face, I would observe and see how and where to draw the structures and the lines found. I would also try and be even more patient with myself and give me ample time to draw the pictures carefully rather than just drawing it for the sake of drawing it. So, if I were to do it again, I'll try to do even better! :D

Peer Critique-
(Dinah's work)

Describe what you see, using elements of art (line, shape, form,texture and so forth) as your guide, describe what your peer drawn, what is the whole thing about.
I really liked Dinah's work. It's very unique in some way, because when she draw out her portrait, she adds in alot of detail. She draw 3 different sides of herself on a new sheet of paper and I get to see the different aspects of her drawing. When she draw her final design, it's very simple and I can see the story behind it. So overall, good job to her!

Analyse how the work is being presented,
using principles of design (emphasis, repetition, rhythm, depth and so forth), analyse what is the relationship of the subject matter and the background.
Dinah's work like I said is nicely decorated and very creative. For example she draw her face not exactly full, and there is a flow when she draw the cultures around her face and it looked really nice. Her face is also being stylize by adding in the tiles.

Interpretate how the work make you feel and think,
-Describe the expressive qualities you find in the work. What expressive language would you use to describe the qualities (i.e., tragic, ugly, funny)?-Does the work remind you of other things you have experienced (i.e., analogy or metaphor)?-How does the work relate to other ideas or events in the world and/or in your other studies?
In her drawing, everything seemed very simple and easy. She looked as if she is blown away by the aspects of the malay culture. Her picture reminds me of the real batik only there is her face printed on it. It has equal balance, meaning that there is not much malay culture drawing drawn on her final design which is a good thing if not there would be too much confusion and it would be hard to understand what she is trying to say in her drawing.

Evaluate if this work is a success or a failure.
-What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or failure?-Compare it with similar works that you think are good or bad.-How original is the work? Why do you feel this work is original or not original?
I overall think that Dinah's work is very unique and of course very original as I feel it is a huge success. I am aware that she has put in a lot of effort to produce the final design, making sure it'll look very artistic. The qualities that make it a success is that she uses the different principle of designs and looked very creative. So, good job Dinah! :D

Xoxo,

Farahin-

Yani

Self critique
(ii)hmm , 6 out of 10.
(i) the stylization is okae and theres effort put in. but its done quite bad too as it is not done fully . my background stylization is also not done yet . i did nt shade all the lines behind which make the drawing look so not completed .
(iii)if i had the chance , i would make it much much more nicer and much more creative. i will make use of all th space left to draw more picture too. i will try to finish up my work on time and make th drawing more nicer . (:
Peer critique
I will comment on my friend,JI YOON .


Describe what you see, using elements of art (line, shape, form,texture and so forth) as your guide, describe what your peer drawn, what is the whole thing about.

- ji yoon self potrait make use of alot of lines and shapes . i can see th shape of a puzzle which forms up her self potrait. i find this drawing cool . she also included some random designs as her background to cover up all the space left . my peer has drawn her self-potarit and stylize it creatively . she had made her face into a jigsaw puzzle tht has been solved .

Analyse how the work is being presented,using principles of design (emphasis, repetition, rhythm, depth and so forth), analyse what is the relationship of the subject matter and the background.

- ji yoon make use of repetition . she repeated the jigsaw puzzle on her face . i think there's some rythm at her background drawings . i think the background is just random drawing so that her potrait wont look so plain . i find this drawing creative too .



iii) Interpretate how the work make you feel and think,-Describe the expressive qualities you find in the work. What expressive language would you use to describe the qualities (i.e., tragic, ugly, funny)?-Does the work remind you of other things you have experienced (i.e., analogy or metaphor)?-How does the work relate to other ideas or events in the world and/or in your other studies?

- i think that her drawing is happy as her face shows a happy smile . the way she draw a background also seems to show that she is happy and not in a sad or bad mood. her drawing also remind me of their cultures and shows some teamwork . by seeing at her drawing, i can know about what her culture is like .



iv) Evaluate if this work is a success or a failure.-What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or failure?-Compare it with similar works that you think are good or bad.-How original is the work? Why do you feel this work is original or not original?

- i think her work is a success but at the same time it is not too . her potrait is nice but her other drawing really need more pictures to cover up all th space and she should at least shade more so that the picture will look more interesting and lively . i think her work is original as she's th only one who make use of jigsaw puzzle to draw her face . overall i think her drawing is nice and i like it . (:

Guan Hong

self critique:I think it is a failure .the stylisation of my do look like me but using effort to draw,i think i am proud of myself.i uses cubise to stylies my portriat as it is quite easy to draw and it only involve straight lines.I choose front portriat as it has all my face feature and it is qite a challenge.^^

(ii)Out of 10 marks, i will give myself 5 marks.

(iii)If i have a chance to draw diffently,i will now draw again.

Peer critique to Germaine:She drew a stylies of herself that a picture is burning away as it is like flame of her.

(ii)She has did repetittion as the flower is repeated.It would be good if she present some depth in her drawing like drawing some flowers from big to small.

(iii) The flower are blooming and yet she is melting away. This word seem to create a mix feeling of sadness and happiness. Like life, there's always sadness and happiness.

Germaine

Self-critique:

I think that this drawing is quite successful, because it's also a piece of art after all. And I also think that the designs are quite special because of those flames for stylisation.

Out of 10 marks, I think I would give myself 8 marks, because there's always a room for improvement if I put in more effort than what I am putting in now.

If I'm given a chance to draw again, I think I'll draw differently. Although I like this piece, there may be other pieces that are nicer and unique.

Peer-critique:

I think that Mahsuri has great drawings, as she has put effort in her work. There were lines, and there were also depth, as she darkens her lines. As for me, I think that her drawing is about her culture, as we can see that there are some malay decorations around her drawing.

Those lines are really different from others, and it's uniquely different. She has repetition showed for her culture, and that shows that she's really wanting a great work for her end results.

She has contrasted her drawings, as divided into 2 sides and a side shaded and one side not.

It's very creative and it shows her character. It's pretty and she looks quite happy in the drawing. Compared to mine, I think that you've put more effort than me in this work. You've really done well, and I think it's very successful. This drawing makes people feel different, and I know you can do better. Keep it up (:

-Germaine.

Mahsuri

Self critic ;

What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or a failure?
I feel that my art pieces are drawn mainly using a mixture of modern and tradisional design. Mainly i like to darken the outline and put some bright colour into it. My drawing was drawn with using half of my face and the other half was all my malay culture designs. In my opinion, my drawing is a success because I am using a lot of atistic design and the layout seems beautiful.


Out of 10 marks, how many marks will you reward yourself?
Out of 10, i feel i reward myself with 7 out of 10. My art pieces are not drawn perfectly yet but i am keen to learn more about different kinds of drawings.

If given a chance to start all over again, what would you have done differently?
If i have given the chance, i would shade and fill up all the needed sides to be shaded. I am not so impressed with the shading and the outline and it seems plain. But, i will shade the the
sides using different types of shading techniques. It may seem nice and bautifully done too.

Peer, (Jacqueline)

Heyy Jacquline, nice design you got there. You use many types of your own cultural designs. You are really a good drawer and has a high potential of drawing and shading too. Good job, you use repitition because your background have a ot of repeating designs. Keep it up.

shirley

Self Critique:
(i) I think that it is a failure as i complicated it too much, that it did not turn out as nice as I thought.

(ii) 06/10

(iii)I could have simplify it to make it less complicated, so as it would look nicer, and emphasis on what I wanted to emphasis.

Peer Critique[supuchcha]:
(i) supuchcha's drawing showed alot of her Thai culture, but it is not so obvious as she mixed them together.there is also writings of thai languages that expressed her culture.

(ii) There is emphasis on the center of the drawing which looked like her face, though its not big or colourful, she made use of dots and lines to emphasis it.

(iii) The background on the left hand side, looked like a sun, while the other side, she made use of cris-crosses, which shows both her negative & positive side.

(iv) This work is a success. She showed out her culture fully and made it out that it is her own culture and she is proud of being a part of it.

phyllis

self critique :
i think that its quite a failure as the shapes were like improportional. and the sizes dint match.
but i like the design i have made and if i can start again i will change the sizes accurately and i will put in more effort when doing my work. i will give myself 6/10

peer critque ( friend below me ) SHAFIQAH
i think she have put in alot effort in her work and she draw with thick lines and she drew her drawing colour contrast. she used pop art in her drawing which is very hard to draw and she put in alot of effort in her work. she did her drawings in a very complicated way. but her drawings look happy as though she enjoy drawing alot
overall i think its a great success snd i think she is very creative

peng yang

self critique

(i)I felt that its a great success as we put alot of time and mind into this drawings.

(ii)I will award myself 7/10.

(iii)I would do more on colouring and redesign the whole again.

Peer critique

(i)Her drawing is rather attractive and special, she change her face and hair were light in colour.

(ii)Her eyes were too big for her face, the picture of her is 60% matching to the real life but over all the features of her face is quite similar.

(iii)I think she would have done better if she used more colour on the painting.

(iv)Her work is well done and its a big success!!!!

Filzah

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recapping on the process and new task for youfor march holiday!

first task: draw 10 items that relate to your culture. (credit to Germaine)

Task 2: Using grid reference as a guide, draw two view of yourself.

task 3: stylise yourself and some of your drawn objects related to your culture.

task 4: combine your research into 2 layouts.

Task 5: upload your final design and do a self critique and peer critique (of your peer's drawing posted below you).

Questions to guide

Self Critique

Reflection on the artmaking process on “Who am I?”
i) What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or failure?
ii) Out of 10 marks, how many marks will you award yourself?
iii) If given a chance to start all over again, what would you have done
differently?

Peer Critique (critique on your peer's work posted below you)

i) Describe what you see,

using elements of art (line, shape, form, texture and so forth) as your guide, describe what your peer drawn, what is the whole image about.

eg - XXX's work drew an stylization of herself. She melted herself in the image and she drew different shapes in her objects making it unique.

ii) Analyse how the work is being presented,

using principles of design (emphasis, repetition, rhythm, depth and so forth), analyse what is the relationship of the subject matter and the background.

eg- XXX did some repetition in her drawing. She repeated a flower which is representative of her culture. There is some rhythm in how she present her face by displacing them in a up-down layout. It would be good if she present some depth in her drawing like drawing some flowers from big to small.

iii) Interpretate how the work make you feel and think,

-Describe the expressive qualities you find in the work. What expressive language would you use to describe the qualities (i.e., tragic, ugly, funny)?
-Does the work remind you of other things you have experienced (i.e., analogy or metaphor)?
-How does the work relate to other ideas or events in the world and/or in your other studies?

eg. XXX's drawing seem sad as she is melting away. The flower are blooming and yet she is melting away. This word seem to create a mix feeling of sadness and happiness. Like life, there's always sadness and happiness.

iv) Evaluate if this work is a success or a failure.

-What qualities of the work make you feel it is a success or failure?
-Compare it with similar works that you think are good or bad.
-How original is the work? Why do you feel this work is original or not original?

eg.. it's a success. I like her work as it evoke a mixed feeling in me. I like the rhythmetic feel of the art piece. and this piece of work is orginal. I never see this work before.

--- Ms Tan